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Monday, August 5, 2019

My Poem






Noun         Adjectives           verbs
Makorori point       big wide sea stretching  out Splash        
Waves                   to the ocean.                   Howling wind
Mountains             hard strong mountains.             People shouting
Lighthouse            green dark mountains .             loud              
Water                    cold deep blue sea.             rough
People                  crashing light blue waves.
Fome                    
Surfboard
Bush 

The Makorori points light blue waves splashes and crashes in the big wide sea stretching
out to the cold deep blue ocean.You can hear the wind howling and people shouting loudly
as the sound start to ring in your ear. 
  
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 7, 2019 at 12:02 PM

    Hi Veer
    It's me Luke
    I like your writing my favourite bit was the one about the waves. :-)

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 24, 2019 at 9:19 AM

    Hi luke
    Thanks for your nice comment i look forward to seeing some of your writing on your blog

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