High Jump
Slowly jogging to the terrifying
high jump area “line up in two
lines” Miss Forster said in a
loud voice ,if you jump with
your lift leg come over here
but if you jump with your right
leg come and set over in a line
right were my foot is”Miss
Forster said with her normal tone.
Remember you can only
scissor jump when you
are at interschools.For a
minute there I forgot
how to do a scissor jump
but luckily Miss Forster did
an example for the people
who don't know how to do
a scissor jump
My turn
Oh no there's only three
people left to go and then
it's my turn sweat dripping
down my face and people looking
right at me there were thoughts
going through my head i felt like
i was going to faint i started
taking deep breaths in and out
i didint want to jump but i didint
want to be embarrassed either.
So I took the rasik my heart
was beating fast so i got ready
just like how i would start a race
go so was running fast around the
cones but then i just froze i
don't know what happened
My thoughts are now telling me
i shouldint be worried next time
I found it very hard to jump over the high jump
I really enjoyed finishing the jump
I found it very hard to jump over the high jump
I really enjoyed finishing the jump
Kia ora Veer. It was so lovely to read all about your high jump experience! It's a challenging pursuit in athletics isn't it? I really love the way you captured all the 'feeling' around your experience, as it's not always easy to do that in writing. Next, maybe you could revisit your writing and add capitals for the word "I" as you're such an important person! It would also be so neat to see a photo of you doing your high jump activity, or a Google Drawing you've created of yourself having a go at it. Thanks for sharing your learning with us! What do you think you could improve on next time?
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